History as a foreign language: can we teach Year 11 pupils to write with flair?
Disappointed that the use of the "PEEL" writing scaffold had led her Year 11 students to write some rather dreary essays, Claire Simmonds reflected that a lack of specific training on historical writing might be to blame. Drawing on genre theory and the work of the history teaching communi...
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Published in | Teaching history (London) no. 163; pp. 35 - 42 |
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Abstract | Disappointed that the use of the "PEEL" writing scaffold had led her Year 11 students to write some rather dreary essays, Claire Simmonds reflected that a lack of specific training on historical writing might be to blame. Drawing on genre theory and the work of the history teaching community, Simmonds attempted to theorise the discipline-specific characteristics of "historical" writing. In this article, Simmonds explores how her teaching of writing processes, which draw on syntax and lexis in a manner typically associated with English as an Additional Language, can help pupils to produce more sophisticated written explanations. |
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AbstractList | Preparing pupils to be active participants in an 'age of communication' requires us to teach them how to communicate.2 Ofsted's Removing Barriers to Literacy showed how wholeschool approaches to improving literacy are no longer simply best practice, but a standard practice that fosters specific policy connections between history and literacy.3 These approaches, however, have traditionally focused on 'Speaking', 'Listening' and 'Reading'; taking meaning from the written word rather than exploring its craft. Looking ahead Critically evaluating and analysing theories on teaching and learning literacy has been a highly rewarding experience, giving me the opportunity to consider the importance of literacy and reminding me that, contrary to the claim, 'this literacy stuff is all very well but I've got a subject to teach', explicitly teaching students to write well is not only to the benefit of, but the responsibility of all teachers.34 Teachers of any literary subject, including history, are used to listening to concerns frequently raised by universities, businesses and parents that students are leaving school unable to write essays, and it is clear that current methods of dealing with them are not yielding the results needed.35 Teaching a 'quick fix' programme to my Year 1 Is is a step in the right direction, but as one of my pupils conceded, 'I already have a habit which is very hard to break'. Disappointed that the use of the "PEEL" writing scaffold had led her Year 11 students to write some rather dreary essays, Claire Simmonds reflected that a lack of specific training on historical writing might be to blame. Drawing on genre theory and the work of the history teaching community, Simmonds attempted to theorise the discipline-specific characteristics of "historical" writing. In this article, Simmonds explores how her teaching of writing processes, which draw on syntax and lexis in a manner typically associated with English as an Additional Language, can help pupils to produce more sophisticated written explanations. |
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